I listen to music every day and the radio when i am in my bed room and in the living room .i listen to all day but not when i am at school. i listen to all sorts of music but most of the time it is pop and people speaking on the radio i have to listen to it as my dad puts it on i enjoy listening to it as it makes me have lots of feeling as it also makes me feel happy and calm i also like drawing to music as some times as it makes me what to never stop doing what i am doing .
I also really enjoy music as i love dancing to it as you when i am dancing i can express your feelings and you can dance to many different piece and it just makes me feel AMAZING and so so so happy.
AND THAT IS WHY I ABSOLUTELY LOVE MUSIC.
my top two tunes
.scientist by coldplay
.girls like you
it makes me feel peaceful
Dear Kitty, thank you for sharing your writing on the Blog. I enjoy listening to the radio when I am working as it helps me concentrate. Sometimes, like your dad, I listen to Talk Radio. When you described how you love to dance to music as it expresses your feelings, I remembered how when I was a little girl, I’d love to dance. Never stop dancing Kitty. My tip for your writing would be to read it aloud again and just check that you have used a capital letter for I.
Happy writing and happy dancing.
Mrs James