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water park

The water park is so much fun because you can swim, play with your family and go on the slide.

2 thoughts on “water park”

  1. Creativity Mrs W says:

    Thank you Bobby. Going to a water park does sound fun! Have you ever been to one before? Try and explain what it was like so you can add to your sentence. Good try Bobby 🙂

  2. Keerat says:

    Well done Bobby. That sounds fun! 🙂 One piece of advice is that could you add a bit more detail, like where is the water park situated, what kind of slides are there, is it outside or inside?
    well done.
    From Keerat

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