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THE BOY THAT GETS LOST IN A MYSTERIOUS FOREST

As I walk though the deep dark wood. the sun shone though the leafless trees lighting up the muddy wet path that was covered in leaves that were rustling under my shoes .
All of a sudden, out of now where ,a man came out and he was blocking the path . And he was wearing a big pointy hat and you could only see his bottom lip and his very hairy beard he had a balk suit on that had lots of moth holes in it and lots of rips in it ” what are you doing here nobody has been her for years?” he said with a deep cocky voice
i replied, “i am on holiday i was at the beach and my mummy told me to go and explore the forest so i did a went to far in and now i am trying to find my way back to the beach can you help me i am very scared ” …

One thought on “THE BOY THAT GETS LOST IN A MYSTERIOUS FOREST”

  1. Creativity Mrs W says:

    Thank you Kitty for your writing, it has some good fronted adverbials. I like the way you’ve written ‘leafless trees’ and ‘rustling under my shoes’, really takes the reader to what you are thinking about. I wonder who the man with the pointy hat will turn out to be and whether the lost person will return home? Remember to check your punctuation and ‘I’ is always a capital letter. Great writing Kitty 🙂

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